题目

英文翻译,帮我看看对不对（急需）
Dear shirley mcgee
I have received your last email.
The garments on the pictures look very beautiful.
But we need more information for quoting, such as fabric composition,the sizes of the garments.
Please send it to me in another email.I will quote them for you as soon as possible.I believe we will cooperate happily.
In addition,Christmas is coming. In China,Christmas is fashion too. We send apples and chocolate to each other.Now I give you my best wishes for Christmas.
Merry Christmas
Thank you.

提问时间：2020-06-13

答案

内容过于烦琐重复,格式不对 人称开头要大写帮你改了一下,简单明了.
另外这里你用garments 如果是具体的什么样子的服装可以换具体的词代替.Jacket Blazer Suits ...etc.
Dear Shirley McGee
I saw the pictures you sent,they are pretty.I just need to know the fabric composition,the garments size and more details for quoting.Please email me back ASAP.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Best Regards,
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