题目

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面对高考，父母孩子们都有着沉重的压力。请仔细观察下面漫画，写一篇短文。要求：
1．描述漫画内容，如情景、人物、动作等等；
2．着重描述漫画所表达的现象以及你的看法。
注意：1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

As is vividly shown in the cartoon, while the boy is still in sound sleep,
                                           
                                                                           

答案

One possible version:
As is vividly shown in the cartoon, while the boy is still in sound sleep, the father is observing his watch and saying to the mother who is carrying the breakfast,“It’s time to wake him up…”
As a Senior Three student, study time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to work hard from early mornings till late evenings, even stay up too late. Our parents are worrying about the college entrance exams, so they cruel-heartedly stop the child from sleeping.
In my opinion, enough sleep is necessary. Otherwise we would feel tired both physically and mentally. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in this period is really good for us.
Our life should be pleasant. How we are looking forward to some relaxing exercises! How we wish to have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk! After all, health is far more important than study.         (155)

解析

本文是一篇看图作文，内容贴近考生实际。对考生的要求较高，要求描述图片内容，并列出要点，表达出看法。描述图片时要注意说明爸爸妈妈的形态，图片内容即高考在即，学生压力很大，挑灯夜战，导致睡眠不足。个人观点父母要注意不要给孩子太大压力，只要尽力就行了！在写作时注意使用高级词汇和恰当连接词。