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进入高中以来，同学们倍感学习任务重，压力大。许多同学争分夺秒甚至连课间十分钟的休息时间也花在学习上。针对这一现象，请以A Ten-minute Break为题，写一篇词数为100左右的短文，短文的内容必须包括以下几点
1.十分钟的课间休息是必要的
2.要注意休息的方式
3.我通常是怎样利用这十分钟的
  As students of Senior Middle school, we have to study from early morning till late evening.                                                                      
                                                                              

答案

As students of Senior Grade Three, we have to study from early morning till late evening. With great pressure, many of us grasp every minute to study, even a ten-minute break.
Therefore to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely important and necessary. Otherwise, we may feel both physically and mentally tired.
During the ten-minute break we should do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest instead of getting more tired
My ten-minute break is always pleasing. I usually do some simple exercises, such as a free chat or a walk with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel fresh again

解析

本文讨论的内容是学生非常熟悉的，具有很强的可写性。文章的要点并不是很清晰，需要考生自己梳理，属于半开放性的作文。在写这篇文章时，一定要注意谋篇布局，列出自己要写的要点，在第三点上可以做适当的发挥。注意使用合适的连接词和高级的句型如强调句型，倒装句之类，让文章更有档次。