题目

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坐火车旅行还是乘飞机旅行
人们在工作之余都喜欢去旅游，有人坐火车，有人喜欢乘飞机，请以“Train Travel Air Travel”为题 写一篇关于坐火车，和乘飞机各自优缺点的文章，内容包括以下要点：
1、飞机速度很快，可以节约时间； 乘坐更舒适。但价格较贵
2、坐火车可以欣赏到沿途的风景；而且价格更便宜。但有时很拥挤，乘坐时间常，容易疲劳。
3、说说你的观点。   
注意:不能逐字逐句的翻译，可以适当的举例说明。
Train Travel Air Travel
More and more people like travelling, some of them like travelling by train ,but some prefer to taking the plane.
                                                                                
Yours;
Li Hua

答案

Train Travel Air Travel
Air travel has two advantages over train travel. First, it can save much time. We can fly from Beijing to Guangzhou just in two hours, but by train, we have to spend 24 hours or more. Second, air travel is more comfortable, because the plane flies so smoothly that we can rest well during the trip, while the train is crowded sometimes and passengers have to sit for a long time, which makes them tired. But train travel also has its advantages. For example, traveling by train costs only 250 yuan while traveling by air will cost 900 yuan. Besides this, outside of the train"s windows, we can enjoy the views of many big cities, such as Zhengzhou, Wuhan, and Changsha.
So I think different people like different ways of traveling

解析

本文是考生比较熟悉的题材，是关于坐火车和坐飞机旅游的优点和缺点的文章，文章的要点都已经给出，考生需要用适当的连接词把这些要点连接成流畅的短文，如first, second等。也可以使用相对高级的句型如倒装句，强调句等等。在发表个人观点的时候要注意使用谚语如every coin has two sides(事物都有两方面)等来提升文章的档次，以取得高分。
点评：此类文章可以使用模板，切记不要写成流水账。优点归优点写，缺点归缺点来写。不要混着写，会显的没有条理。