题目

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请你给《中国日报》写一份稿件，谈谈目前各大城市由于汽车保有量的不断增长，造成交通堵塞，交通事故直线上升，城市空气质量下降等多个问题，并提出你个人的解决问题的办法（如绿色出行，拼车等），希望市民能共同努力，创造一个良好的生活环境。
要求：
1: 不要逐字逐句翻译。
2：语句要连贯通顺。
3：字数在120左右。

答案

Cars do really bring convenience. Distance is no longer a big problem for journey with the invention.
As the government encourages the Automobile industry, the number of cars in most cities has been increasing for several years. According to a data from the police, in Shanghai nearly every three persons own a car. As a result, traffic jam has become a severe problem in those major cities, especially when people are on the way to or back from work. This has directly and strongly affected people’s daily life and work. Meanwhile, the traffic accidents have caught people’s eyes. And what is even worse, along with the accidents come the pollution and noise.
Actually, living in a green way is practical. Either taking a bus or subway or carpooling is a good way to reduce the number of cars on the road. Besides, cycling can replace driving if our house is not so far from where we work. It may take a bit longer but saves energy, avoids traffic jam and improves our health. If possible, we can even walk. In one word, solutions are more than problems.
City is a place where people gather. To solve a problem can never depend on one person. However difficult the problem may be, it will certainly become easy when we build a shared vision.

解析

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。本文是关于汽车与环境关系的短文，属于提纲类作文，其要点都已经给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，但是本文的要点较多，考生一定要注意删减，压缩用简略的语言表达出所需要表达的意思。可以使用with复合结构等来连接两个要点，让文章先的紧凑。同时要使用高级的句型让文章富有变化，更有层次感。
点评：提纲类短文写作要求包括所有要点，不能有遗漏。但本文要点较多，考生要力求简洁，不要拖沓。