题目

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假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：
1. 乐观的人生态度；
2. 努力学习；
3. 参加体育锻炼。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已为你写好。
 

答案

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

解析

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，文字提示里所给要点不多，考生需要做适当的发挥，在写作的过程中，一定要注意使用合适的连接词来连接全文如firstly, secondly, thirdly等；让文章成为一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和高级句型提升问的文采和层次。
点评：提纲类作文最重要的是要把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏或省略。本文所给要点不多，需要考生做较多的发挥，在写作时，注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。