题目

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我班就“有些学生在学校贴吧上发表对老师不满的言语”一事是否妥当进行讨论。下面是讨论的结果。请你以 “We should express opinions on our teachers in a right way” 为主题,写一篇报道介绍这次讨论的情况以及你的观点。　

多数学生认为是错误的	他们的理由：1.老师永远值得尊重 2.背地里说坏话是卑鄙的 3.学生应坦诚跟老师交流
少数学生认为是恰当的	他们的理由：1.可安全、自由地表达自己观点 2.当面说会让老师难堪的
你的观点	？

注意：1.词数120左右；   
2.参考词汇：贴吧 post bar,  卑鄙的mean(adj.) ,  难堪的embarrassed (adj.)      
背地里behind one’s back/privately

答案

We should express opinions on our teachers in a right way
Last week there was a heated discussion about whether we should express freely our opinions on our teachers in our school’s post bar. Different students have various opinions on it. Here are their words:
A majority of the students think that the teachers must be worth respecting permanently. Besides, it is mean that one person make any irresponsible comments behind on others, especially our loved teachers. As a senior student, we should learn how to make a deep communication with our teachers when we have any dissatisfaction to our teachers.
There is no denying that some students have different opinions and their behaviors. They think that only in this way can they express their real thought and feelings freely and safely. On the other hand, if a student makes much complaint to teachers face to face, it will bring much embarrass to our teachers. 
In my opinion, we shouldn’t stab our teacher in the back; we should be honest to exchange our inside words with our teachers, which can make the two sides of us beneficial.

解析

试题分析：本篇书面表达为正反方议论文。讨论有些学生在学校贴吧上发表对老师不满的言语的行为，要写出认为是错误的观点和认为是恰当的观点，及自己的观点，文章结构为：引入句→②正方观点阐述→ƒ反方观点阐述→④自己的观点，论述两种不同观点主要是结合要点写，要注意遣词造句，自己的看法没有要点要学生自己发挥。要求学生有很好的英语思维能力。
点评：正反方议论文结构典型，要记住基本结构，另外多记忆一些模板句。写作时可以套用一些固定格式，但里面的内容句式要富于变化，层次清晰，语句连贯。