题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

假设你是李红,你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排,请根据以下要点,写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。
1. 学开车 2. 参加英语培训课程 3. 去北京看奥运会 4. 游览北京的名胜
注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。
Dear Robert,
How time flies!                                                                 
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                         

答案

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Dear Robert:
How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.
That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?
Best wishes!

解析

试题分析：考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的，信的格式和开头语已给出，这降低了写作难度，但同时要注意第二句要接好，这也增加了难度。考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
点评：应避免句式过于单一呆板，应该有长有短、错落有致；有抑有扬，使文章有很强的节奏感，这就要求懂得灵活运用富于变化的各种句式。例如强调句、倒装句、with复合结构、非谓语动词、恰到好处的被动句、高级的定语从句、what引导的主语从句等。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，注意使用高级词汇及句型句式等。