题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
内容要点如下:
1.为躲避纳粹追捕,与家人一起避难;
2.日记成为唯一可倾诉的朋友;
3.向往自由和大自然。
注意:
1.词数1 00左右;
2.可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
答案
One possible version
Anne was a Jewish girl who lived in the Netherlands during World War II.
She had to hide away with her family, so that they wouldn’t be caught by the German Nazis. During that time she made her diary her best friend, to which she could tell her deepest feelings and thoughts. Not having been able to be outdoors for so long, Anne was crazy about everything to do with nature. One evening, she stayed awake till midnight on purpose in order to enjoy the moon with the risk of being exposeD.How she wished she could regain freedom and experience nature herself!
Unfortunately, they were caught by the Nazis eventually and Anne died in a concentration camp in 1945.
解析
试题分析:本文是一篇给出汉语提示的提纲类作文。文章只给出了简单的汉语提示,这需要考生充分发挥自己的想象力,将文章内容流畅地表达出来。成文时应注意以下几点:1.文章内容要齐全;(1)为躲避纳粹追捕,与家人一起避难;(2)可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)向往自由和大自然。
2.时态:一般过去时;3.人称:以第三人称;4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型,以提高文章的档次;5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。6.词数控制在100左右。
【亮点说明】使用了从句:She had to hide away with her family, so that they wouldn’t be caught by the German Nazis. During that time she made her diary her best friend, to which she could tell her deepest feelings and thoughts.使用非谓语动词:Not having been able to be outdoors for so long, Anne was crazy about everything to do with nature. One evening, she stayed awake till midnight on purpose in order to enjoy the moon with the risk of being exposed.
核心考点
试题【假定你是“安妮文化”的宣传大使,要在你校英文报上简要介绍安妮(Anne)在二战期间的经历。内容要点如下:1.为躲避纳粹追捕,与家人一起避难;2.日记成为唯一可倾】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
知心话 | 对父母的感谢 | 感谢他们倾注关爱,关心鼓励 |
对父母的希望 | 1. 和他们多交流,使自己保持良好状态 | |
2. 创造条件,给自己提供实时帮助 | ||
学习打算 | 考生自拟(至少写两点) |
短文须包括以上所有内容要点。
词数100左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mom and Dad,
The annual college entrance examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could
have a heart-to-heart talk with you.
Yours ever
Li Hua
假设你所在小区的物业管理中心就目前存在的问题张贴告示,如下所述:告示
亲爱的业主:
目前,小区饲养宠物的人越来越多,宠物粪便随处可见,且难以清除。为防止含有有害细菌的粪便传播疾病,所以就此提醒宠物应受到严格限制,且宠物主须牢记:1、须到相关部门办理宠物饲养许可证;2、须在宠物年满四个月后的30天内为其接种疫苗,并在一年内再次接种疫苗。
物业管理中心
2013年9月11日
【写作内容】
1、描述目前小区出现的问题;
2、物业管理中心的提醒;
3、宠物主须牢记的两点;
4、张贴此告示的目的。
【写作要求】
1、开头与结尾已给出;
2、只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。
提示词:vaccinate给…接种疫苗
Notice
Sept 11th, 2013
Dear residents,
Hence, every pet owner should consciously take good care of your pet in a right way.
Property Management Centre
活动内容:
1.与那儿的中学老师和学生交流,了解他们的生活和学习情况;
2.参观大英博物馆,了解当地的历史和文化;去英国家庭就餐,学做甜品(dessert),以便于回国后与家人、朋友分享;
3.去英国的农村,感受大自然。
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
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Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate decreases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to health.
Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.
Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or a teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2.然后以约120个词就“努力学习,快乐生活”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:
(1)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗?简要阐述理由。
(2)举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的?
(3)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活?
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准] 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
请根据以上说明、写作要点和写作要求,为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1.赞成者观点;
2.反对者观点;
3.自己的观点。
写作要求:
1.短文词数不少于100;
2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3.可根据情况增减细节,详略得当;
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:倒计时牌countdown board 口号slogan
With less than 60 days before the College Entrance Examinations, _________________
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