题目

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你校校门口在放学时间经常出现交通拥堵，给师生和路人带来很多不便。你校英文报就此向学生征集解决拥堵的良策。假如你是高三学生李华，请按下列提示用英语写一封信，向校报投稿。
1. 写信的目的。
2. 分析学校门口拥堵的原因。
3. 提出2-3点建议。
注意：词数120左右。
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Yours,
Li Hua

答案

One possible version：
Dear Editor ,
I’m liHua , a student from Grade 3. I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.
With so many parents coming to pick up their children , traffic jams are frequent near the school gate , causing much inconvenience to us and passers- by .
I strongly recommend some effective measures be taken .First , we should encourage students to ride a bicycle or walk to school by themselves instead of taking a car , which will not only help reduce the jam , but benefit students’ health . It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others . Besides , cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate .
I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can disappear soon.
Yours,
LiHua

解析

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一封信。根据提示的要点，文章可以分为三段，第一段写写信的目的，第二段分析学校门口拥堵的原因，第三段提出自己的建议。这样的段落安排会使文章脉络分明，结构清晰。此外，在提出几项建议时要注意使用表顺序的连接词，以使文章有条理性，层次感。在时态选择上可以使用一般现在时来表述建议，而且在写作时还要注意运用多样化的句式和句法结构，以提高文章档次。
【亮点说明】本篇范文语言简练流畅，结构紧凑，要点全面。在结构安排上采用三段式，首段提出写信的目的，其他两段分析原因和给出建议，这样的安排显示了作者思路的清晰，而且使得文章条理分明。此外，介词短语With so many parents coming to pick up their children，和分词短语causing much inconvenience to us and passers- by的使用使句式更富于变化。并且First， but，also， Besides等词的使用也使文章内容衔接更为自然，有效地起到了承接上下文的作用，显示了较强的逻辑性。