题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
A boy found an eagle’s egg and he put it in the nest of a hen. The eagle hatched and thought he was a chicken. He grew up doing what chickens do—scratching for food and flying short distances. It was a dull life. Gradually the eagle grew older and biller. One day he and his chicken friends saw a beautiful bird soaring on the currents of air, high above the mountains.
“Oh, I wish I could fly like that!” said the eagle. The chicken replied, “Don’t give it another thought. That’s the mighty(强大的) eagle, the king of all birds—you could never be like him!” And the eagle didn’t give it another thought. He went on cackling and complaining about life. He died thinking he was a chicken.
My friends, you too were born an eagle. The Creator intended you to be an eagle, so don"t listen to the chickens!
【写作内容】
1、以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2、以约120个词谈谈你对“自信”的看法,内容包括:
(1) 鹰成为鸡的原因;
(2) 这则故事的启示。
【写作要求】
1、可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
答案
Hatched by a hen, an eagle lived like a chicken. He wanted to fly like an eagle but discouraged by his fellows. Eventually he died bitterly without knowing he himself was an eagle. (33 words)
Some factors may account for why the eagle was made a chicken. Firstly, the eagle was influenced by the chickens around him, scratching for food just like them without a higher goal. Secondly, the eagle failed to reflect on himself, so he didn’t know he had the potential to fly high. Finally, he lacked enough self-confidence, so he gave up his dream of flying like an eagle, just because of the discouraging words from others.
There are many such eagles in our daily life. I think we should avoid negative influences, set a high goal and work hard to achieve it. Besides, we must be confident in our potential and make good use of it to become real eagles.
解析
试题分析:本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,要求有很高的概括提炼的能力,要抓住文章的主题,再以约120个词写一篇短文,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】范文观点明确,有理有据,不乏好的短语和句子:account for是…原因, reflect on反思, gave up 放弃,because of 因为,set a high goal设立很高的目标, be confident in对…自信, make good use of 充分利用,Hatched by a hen, an eagle lived like a chicken. 这句话用了过去分词做状语, the eagle was influenced by the chickens around him, scratching for food just like them without a higher goal. 这句话用了现在分词做状语, 还有范文还使用了Firstly, Secondly, Finally, Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
核心考点
试题【阅读下面的短文,然后按要求写一篇150字左右的英语短文。A boy found an eagle’s egg and he put it in the nest】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
你为你正在上海上的笔友Anderon的健康与安全担心。请你给他写一封信询问他的情
况,并给他提出防护建议。
要点:
1、询问(他的健康状况;人们对流行疾病的反应:是否感到恐惧等)
2、建议(至少三点)
注意:词数:120左右;
Dear Anderon,
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Yor incerely.
注意:1. 词数120左右;
2. 文中需要包含提示内容,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
As the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work. _______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
目的:增长见识,体验文化;
困惑:语言障碍,学业压力;
征求建议。
注意:1. 词数不少于50
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours
Joe
要点:
1. 出入口的设计要符合轮椅出入;2. 电梯的设计;3. 洗手间的设计。
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:设施 facility,电梯:lift;
1.你自己高三时学习方面的变化;
2.你自己高三时生活方面的变化;
3.你对高三同学的建议(至少两点)。
注意:1.内容包括以上要点,但不要逐句翻译;
2.字数120左右,文章开头已提供,不计入总词数。
Dear fellows,
I’m really glad to share my thoughts with you.
Yours,
Wang Lin
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