题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

在紧张的高二备考阶段，英语王老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见，并借此训练学生的书面表达能力。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给老师写封信，表达你的需求和建议。
● 为夯实基础，适当放慢进度，留出思考和消化的时间；
● 请反复训练易错的知识点，提供典型试题；
●…… （个人补充）
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注意：
1．短文必须包括以上要点以及个人的补充要求或建议，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2. 参考词汇：lay a solid foundation打下坚实的基础  slow down减缓速度；放慢速度
3．词数：120个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。
Dear Mr .Wang,
Thank you for providing us with an opportunity to share our views．
In the course of the general revision,_________________________________
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Yours
Zhang Hua

答案

Dear Mr. Wang,
Thank you for providing us with an opportunity to share our views．
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation．So please slow down and make sure we have really mastered what we learn．Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves and to digest．As for those confusing points where we often make mistakes, would you please provide us with typical exercises to practice more? Meanwhile, we need your guidance on writing, for example, how to think in English and write in idiomatic English．I still have another request: select exercises of high quality and assign us less homework．
By the way, as the examination is drawing near, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study．We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time．
Yours
Zhang Hua

解析

试题分析：本题是写一篇给定要求的书信，写作的话题为给老师提出学习的建议，内容包括建议老师适当放慢进度，留出思考和消化的时间；建议老师反复训练易错的知识点，提供典型试题；建议老师对英语写作进行指导；建议老师布置高质量的练习，安排更少的作业；同时写上对老师的感激以及对于即将到来的测试所表现出来的心情，在写作时应注意书信的格式，同时注意写作内容要符合题意，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。注重语言的准确性和连贯性。
【亮点说明】所给范文条理清晰，语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：provide sb. with提供某人某物， of high quality高质量， By the way顺便说一下, what we need is solid foundation．这句话用了主语从句，So please slow down and make sure we have really mastered what we learn．这句话用了宾语从句， As for those confusing points where we often make mistakes, 这句话用了定语从句， as the examination is drawing near, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study．这句话用了非限制性定语从句，We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time．这句话用了it做形式宾语。还有范文还使用了Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。