题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
学校英语报正在酝酿改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:
1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;
2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
答案
Dear Editor,
I’ve learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. I’m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.
Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students’ interest and have positive effects on their study and life.
Compared to the entertainment , I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.
Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers one’s career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success in the future.
What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school English Post.
Yours sincerely,
Cheng Fei
解析
试题分析:这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴,这篇作文要求就校英语报改版的事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容: 1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由,根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后,要弄清要点,围绕要点展开,条理要清晰,理由要充分,关键的是在写作的过程中,要注意人称,时态语态和常见的语法问题,文章尽量简洁,在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇,遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用,让文章更上档次。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,运用了一些词组,如:share with 和…分享,Needless to say不必说, according to 根据, have positive effects on对…有积极的影响,in turn反之,take… into account将…考虑在内,make a great difference to对…有很大的影响,in the hope that希望,句式上体现出多变的特点,如:Compared to the entertainment ,I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important . 这句话用了过去分词和同位语从句,The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. 这句话用了表语从句和while表示对比的用法, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句, What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. 这句话用了主语从句,还有范文还使用了 In addition, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
核心考点
试题【Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instr】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
1. 考试日期与科目;
2. 考试准备情况;
3. 考试吋的状态;
4. 对试题的感受;
5. 可能的考试结果。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好;
3. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯;
4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:college entrance examination
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern. ________________________
______________________________________
________________________________________
(1) 表示欢迎 (2) 介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如天气, 饮食等)
(3) 介绍本班情况 (4) 希望Chris做哪些事情, 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊
注意:
(1) 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。 (2) 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实,行文连贯。
词数不少于100; 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
(1) 参考词汇: 交换生 exchange student
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
参考词汇:住宿—accommodation
要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr. Wang,
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Yue
“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”
要求:1. 就此材料发表你的看法;
2. 紧扣材料,有明确的观点;
3. 词数不少于60;
4. 在答题卡上作答。
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