题目

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Mandela 1918年出生于南非。他是一位伟大的黑人领袖，他为黑人们的平等权利奉献了一生。在1952年他建立律师所，在那里很多穷黑人向他求助。他曾和平地攻击法律，但不被允许。只到那时，他才决定要以暴制暴。因此他被捕入狱.他获得1993年诺贝尔和平奖的原因是他从未放弃为黑人的平等斗争。他一直活跃于社会活动中。他实现了他的梦想—使黑人和白人一样平等。
这就是Mandela,一个勇敢、有决心、无私奉献的英雄。

答案

Nelson Mandela was born in 1918 in South Africa. He is a great black leader who devotes all his life to fighting for the equal rights for the black people.
It was 1952 when he set up a law office where many poor black people turned to him for help. Mandela first attacked the laws in a peaceful way, but this was not allowed. Only then did he decide to answer violence with violence. So he was put into prison. The reason why he won the 1993 Nobel Peace Prize was that he never gave up fighting for the equality of all the blacks. He achieved his dream of making black and white people equal. At
present he is still active in social activities.
n          Such is Mandela—a brave,  determined and unselfish hero.

解析

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点评：本文的关键是要用精确的连接词把人物的发展历程表现出来，写作中的连接词，高级词汇和句型的运用都要有多体现。