题目

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假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jim,
Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I"d like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meeting was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done.
Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping

答案

小题1:recently改recent
小题2:holding改held
小题3:attend改attending
小题4:finishes改finished
小题5:去掉down
小题6:They改We
小题7:great前加a
小题8:why改because
小题9:to改for
小题10:winner改 winners

解析

小题1:后面是名词news，说明这里应该用形容词的形式。
小题2:指运动会被举行，这里应该使用被动语态。
小题3:现在分词短语attending it修饰students and teachers.
小题4:文章讲述的是运动会上发生的事情，故使用过去时。
小题5:break the school record破了学校记录。Break down崩溃，机器坏了。身体垮了。
小题6:we指我们观看比赛的人。
小题7:本句的success是一个可数名词，指一件成功的事情，或一个成功的人。
小题8:That is because后面接的句子是表示原因的。
小题9:for为了…表示目的。我们是在为班级而努力的。
小题10:one of后面接复数名词，表示…之一。