题目

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初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，你在英语课上做了一个以“ Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的值日报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验, 内容包括：　　
普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试　　
我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习　　
我成功缓解压力的方法及效果：……　　
要求:1、文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；　　
2、词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。　　
Less Pressure Makes Better Life　　
Hello, my classmates!　　
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure.　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
                                                                               　　
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!　

答案

One possible version:　　
Less Pressure Makes Better Life　　
Hello, my classmates!　　
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. 　　
I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends. 　　
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.　　
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!

解析

本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，标题是更少的压力会使生活更美好，写作的内容应包括压力是个严重的问题，学生们普遍存在的压力，我个人过去的压力，以及如何来缓解压力的方法和措施，修饰时应注意不同时态的使用，主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时，同时要注意语言的准确性和连贯性。