题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

初中生活即将结束，新的生活即将开启,请为你最要好的同学写一段毕业留言：他(她)给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光以及对他(她)最美好的祝愿。
要求：1、可参考下图所给提示词，也可适当发挥，开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
2、字数80词左右。

School life in middle school will come to an end soon.                                           
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                           

答案

School life in middle school will come to an end soon. I’ll never forget you. You are an outgoing boy/girl. There’s always a smile on your face and everyone likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. At this very moment, I’m saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes: I hope you are happy and healthy forever. I hope you are successful in the future.

解析

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，写一段毕业留言。动笔前先确定书写内容，可以先简单描述这纪念相处的情况，然手再表达一下自己的感想，祝福等。由于是抒情性短文，故用将来时态较多，注意时态和时间状语的搭配。写作中选取自己比较熟悉的内同写，主要不要犯语法书写的低级错误。
点评：这类作文的说些说难也容易，难在没有给出具体材料，需要自己组织材料，易在可以选取自己熟悉的内容写。不跑题不偏题是写好此类作文的关键，动笔前一定要认真阅读题目，要求然后在动笔。