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假如你是林华，就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Daniel发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。

林华	爱好	对实践颜色疗法(therapy)感兴趣；时常建议同学……（自由发挥）；在业余时间经常到图书馆阅读资料或熬夜到很晚观看相关的记录片(documentary)
	困惑	得不到父母的理解
	观点	1.业余爱好有助于从中学到很多知识；2.业余爱好将对未来的发展有利；3. ……(至少一点)
父母	观点	时间应花在功课上；成绩就是一切

注意：1. 词数：100词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥，但文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。
Dear Daniel,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my parents.
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What shall I do? Can you offer me some advice? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Lin Hua

答案

One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my parents. I don’t know how to deal with it and would like your help.
You know I am interested in life on practicing colour therapy. I often advise my classmates on how to use colours to change their moods. In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read. Sometimes I even stay up late watching the documentaries about it. This makes my parents very angry. To them, good marks are everything and they think I should spend more time on my lessons.
I think healthy hobbies can help me with my studies. It will also be good for my future development. What’s more, hobbies can help me relax and make my life more interesting. But I don’t think my parents understand me. I feel bad about that.
What shall I do? Can you offer me some suggestions? I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes
Yours,
Lin Hua

解析

试题分析：本文是材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真审题，把握写作要求和写作目的。本文要求写一篇e-mail，内容是就个人爱好带来的困惑给英国朋友Daniel发电子邮件进行交流并请求帮助。说个人的观点应该用第一人称，父母的观点应该用they做主语。时态是一般现在时。写作前最好列出提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。
【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还恰当地运用了些短语和句式，如how to deal with ; In my spare time;否定前移等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如：What’s more，But等等。