题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

初中阶段的学习和生活即将结束，你的老师陪伴你度过了三年的校园生活。回顾其中的许多点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请你用英文给你的某一位教师写封信，和他(她)说说感激的心里话。
要点提示：

教师表现	1．工作努力，认真； 2．教学耐心，待人友好。
留存记忆	1．严格要求也关爱学生； 2．师生相处和睦； 3．给予学习上和生活上的帮助; ……

要求：1．内容包括所有提示要点，意思完整，语言规范。
2．可适当发挥，增加细节，使语句连贯通畅。
3．文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校。
4．80－100词左右，信的首尾巴写好．不计入总词数。
Dear my teacher,
Leaving you-lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.
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Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.                                        
Thank you again for what you"ve done for us! All the best to you!
Yours,
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答案

Dear my teacher,
Leaving you－lovely junior school life, I have so many words from my heart to say.
Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won"t forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.
Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.
Yours,
XXXX

解析

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要写三年的校园生活的回忆，全文所用时态有一般现在时态、一般过去时态，一般将来时态，还有现在完成时态。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如from my heart ，be strict with,take care of ,get on well with ,each other等短语，文中还用到了时间状语从句 when I failed in an exam, When I had trouble in life,Since you became my English teacher three years ago, ；宾语从句 I won"t forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are.， All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years；感叹句 how interesting your lessons are，how friendly you are.多种时态运用自如，例如现在完成进行时you’ve always been working hard，一般将来时I won"t forget，一般过去时when I failed in an exam.文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。